Doc: review revised Canvas3d documentation

Task-number: QTBUG-44180
Change-Id: I3c6b10354435716e503254cbea0dd75901234242
Reviewed-by: Pasi Keränen <pasi.keranen@digia.com>

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/examples/canvas3d/canvas3d/interaction/doc/src/interaction.qdoc b/examples/canvas3d/canvas3d/interaction/doc/src/interaction.qdoc
index fba0268..3349575 100644
--- a/examples/canvas3d/canvas3d/interaction/doc/src/interaction.qdoc
+++ b/examples/canvas3d/canvas3d/interaction/doc/src/interaction.qdoc
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
     \snippet canvas3d/interaction/qml/interaction/main.qml 1
 
     And then we add three sliders to the layout. Here's the one for
-    controlling x axis rotation:
+    controlling x-axis rotation:
 
     \snippet canvas3d/interaction/qml/interaction/main.qml 2
 
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
     \snippet canvas3d/interaction/qml/interaction/main.qml 3
 
     The \c onValueChanged signal handlers of the \l[QML]{Slider} components
-    are connected to the above properties. Here's the connection in x rotation
+    are connected to the above properties. Here's the connection in x-rotation
     slider as an example:
 
     \snippet canvas3d/interaction/qml/interaction/main.qml 4
@@ -81,10 +81,10 @@
 
     \snippet canvas3d/interaction/qml/interaction/interaction.js 0
 
-    \section1 Drawing in Three Ways
+    \section1 Three Ways of Drawing
 
-    The actual drawing is done in the same way as everywhere else we are
-    drawing the same object multiple times. Only in this case, we use a
+    The actual drawing is no different from any situation where
+    the same object is drawn multiple times. Only in this case we use a
     different drawing mode for each:
 
     \snippet canvas3d/interaction/qml/interaction/interaction.js 1