From c56c9bc0107bced7635bc93edd8521f415e005c7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Leena Miettinen Date: Tue, 10 Dec 2013 12:26:21 +0100 Subject: Doc: edit the sections about preparing devices MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Edit for grammar and style. Use standard wording in lists. Use active voice instead of passive voide. Use lists for all processes. Use the term "SD card" everywhere instead of "micro-SD card". Replace XXX with . Change-Id: Ie300dac911b42120de5e236676aa7b43c39f27d7 Reviewed-by: Topi Reiniö --- src/doc/src/detect-sd-card-device-name.qdocinc | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to 'src/doc/src/detect-sd-card-device-name.qdocinc') diff --git a/src/doc/src/detect-sd-card-device-name.qdocinc b/src/doc/src/detect-sd-card-device-name.qdocinc index e7601c9..40d7f51 100644 --- a/src/doc/src/detect-sd-card-device-name.qdocinc +++ b/src/doc/src/detect-sd-card-device-name.qdocinc @@ -18,28 +18,28 @@ ****************************************************************************/ /*! //! [instructions] - Plug the micro-SD card or reader into the development host PC, + Plug in the SD card or reader to the development host, and use the following command to find out its device name: \code lsblk -d \endcode - Removable devices such as SD cards have a value '1' in + Removable devices such as SD cards have the value '1' in the \e RM column. - \warning \b{Make very sure you select the right device. Selecting - the wrong one can result in a wiped hard drive}. + \warning Make sure to select the correct device, because selecting + the wrong one can result in a wiped hard drive. Typical device names for SD cards include \c {sdb} and \c {mmcblk0}. The full device path is \c {/dev/} followed by - the name. Replace \b XXX with the device name in below - instructions. + the name. - Now make sure the micro-SD card is not mounted: + To make sure that the SD card is not mounted, enter the following + command, where is the device name: \code - umount /dev/XXX + umount /dev/ \endcode //! [instructions] */ -- cgit v1.2.3