Doc: edit for style and grammar

Change-Id: Ib7a0fd4cc11e0e61d0694c72fde2b726d74b2629
Reviewed-on: http://codereview.qt.nokia.com/1607
Reviewed-by: hjk <qthjk@ovi.com>

1 files changed, 22 insertions, 21 deletions

diff --git a/dist/changes-2.3.0 b/dist/changes-2.3.0
index 8966abcb56..7f69c37a11 100644
--- a/dist/changes-2.3.0
+++ b/dist/changes-2.3.0
@@ -8,8 +8,9 @@ git clone git://gitorious.org/qt-creator/qt-creator.git
 git log --cherry-pick --pretty=oneline v2.2.1...origin/2.3
 
 General
-   * Welcome page redesign allows searching through examples with descriptions
-   * Restore previous size when unmaximizing output panes
+   * Redesigned the Welcome page to allow searching through examples with
+     descriptions
+   * Fixed Output panes so that they are minimized to their previous size
    * Added support for building with the Clang compiler
 
 Editing
@@ -23,32 +24,32 @@ Debugging
    * Correct source location for breakpoints in CDB using code model
      (QTCREATORBUG-2317)
    * Added support for multiple breakpoints from one location
-     (covering constructors/destructors, template functions, etc.)
-   * Added custom dumper for QXmlAttributes, Eigen::Matrix
-   * Added choice to set watchpoints on either address or expression
-   * Added framework to modify strings, vectors etc. during debugging
-   * Added option to stop on qWarning
-   * Renamed "Locals and Watchers" into "Locals and Expressions"
-   * Renamed "Watchpoint" into "Data Breakpoints"
-   * Make original value of automatically dereferenced pointer accessible
-   * Improved "Add Breakpoint..." dialog
-   * Improved display of enums (include numeric value)
-   * Improved speed of QVariant dumper
-   * Improved handling of shadowed local variables
+     (covering constructors, destructors, template functions, and so on)
+   * Added a custom dumper for QXmlAttributes, Eigen::Matrix
+   * Added the option to set data breakpoints on either an address or expression
+   * Added a framework to modify strings, vectors, and so on, during debugging
+   * Added an option to stop on qWarning
+   * Renamed "Locals and Watchers" as "Locals and Expressions"
+   * Renamed "Watchpoint" as "Data Breakpoints"
+   * Made original values of automatically dereferenced pointers accessible
+   * Improved the "Add Breakpoint" dialog
+   * Improved the displaying of enums (included numeric value)
+   * Improved the speed of the QVariant dumper
+   * Improved the handling of shadowed local variables
    * Fixed object expansion in tooltip
    * Fixed std::deque dumper (QTCREATORBUG-4936)
-   * Fixed handling of watched expressions with unusual characters
+   * Fixed the handling of watched expressions with unusual characters
    * Fixed "Run To Line" on Mac (QTCREATORBUG-4619)
    * Fixed output parsing for data breakpoints on Mac (QTCREATORBUG-4797)
    * Fixed auto-continue on SIGTRAP (QTCREATORBUG-4968)
-   * Fixed dumper for gcc 4.4's std::map
+   * Fixed the dumper for gcc 4.4's std::map
 
 Debugging QML/JS
 
-Analyzer
-   * Redesign of the framework code
-   * Added support for Qml profiling
-   * Added support for valgrind's cachegrind tool on Linux and Mac
+Analyzing Code
+   * Redesigned the framework code
+   * Added support for QML profiling
+   * Added support for the Valgrind Callgrind tool on Linux and Mac
 
 C++ Support
    * Made C++ coding style configurable (QTCREATORBUG-2670, QTCREATORBUG-4310,
@@ -118,7 +119,7 @@ Remote Linux Support
 Qt Designer
 
 FakeVim:
-   * Make FakeVim functionality available for shortcuts in normal text editor
+   * Made FakeVim functionality available for shortcuts in normal text editor
    * Added snippet support
    * Fixed behaviour of Ctrl keys on Mac
    * Fixed searching for expressions containing '|' (QTCREATORBUG-4752)